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PostSubject: Limbo: Shadow Walk   Fri May 20, 2016 11:10 pm

Name: Limbo: Shadow Walk

Rank: B-Rank

Element: Non-Elemental

Specialties: Space-Time Ninjutsu

Requirements: Rinnegan, Learn from Naraku


Description: Using his Rinnegan, Naraku is able to make himself into a shadow in the invisible world known as Limbo, which is generally impossible to detect or visually perceive. During this time Naraku is undetectable without the enemy having: Sensory Jutsu of A-Rank or Higher, 3 Tomoe Sharingan, Stage 2 Byakugan, or Rinnegan. This jutsu only lasts for 2 posts (Not Including Activation Post), afterwards the user has a cooldown of 6 posts. During his time in Limbo Naraku is only capable of B-Rank Jutsu and lower, he can also only perform a total of 2 Jutsu per post. Naraku can fight during Limbo, however his Strength is half that of normal due to it being an indirect state of presence. Enemy strength is halved as well when attacking Naraku during this state due to the indirect state of presence. Jutsu effects remain the same

Damage: 0

Chakra: 20 Activation, 15 Per Post Active

Cooldown: 6 Post


Word Count: 2,000 Words

Cannon or Custom: Custom

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PostSubject: Re: Limbo: Shadow Walk   Sat May 21, 2016 12:09 am

I'mma just come in here early and just say no. I know the Rinnegan is capable of some freaky-dinky stuff but......no. Limbo? No. There is a canon invisibility jutsu. If you wanna use that then sure. Not this. No offense, Naraku.

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PostSubject: Re: Limbo: Shadow Walk   Sat May 21, 2016 1:20 am

Limbo actual is a Cannon jutsu of the Rinnegan used by Madara Uchiha, this however is a spin off an weaker variation of the Canon jutsi

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PostSubject: Re: Limbo: Shadow Walk   Sat May 21, 2016 10:39 am

My apologises for not knowing Naraku. I'll post again once this is finished.

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PostSubject: Re: Limbo: Shadow Walk   Sat May 21, 2016 9:32 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Limbo: Shadow Walk   Sat May 21, 2016 9:52 pm

For chakra, say the 20 is for activation, while...15 is used to maintain it. Also, for the sake of balancing, I also want a Sensory Jutsu of atleast A-Rank to be able to detect you (so people atleast have a chance). Other then that, you actually did a pretty solid job on making this. Also specificy that the user can also combat you as well (If you want, you could say their physical strength is halved as well when hitting you due to your indirect state).

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PostSubject: Re: Limbo: Shadow Walk   Sat May 21, 2016 10:27 pm

Approved b0ss

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