Akuma no Sosen

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Name: Akuma no Sosen (悪魔の祖先 - Demonic Ancestry)
Origin: Dōji
Type: Special Characteristic
Appearance: Varies, however, the main characteristics one may have normally are: Up to three horns which are two feet long, unnatural skin color (red, blue, yellow, etc), fangs, claws, hair becoming longer and more wild, as well as growing an extra 3 feet. Their muscle mass also increases as well. Members can have these features while in their human forms naturally, but the horns reach 6 inches at the max and are dulled to the point they can do no damage. Their skin will only be slightly tinted in the color their demon form is, while only their canines become sharp.

Description: The ability of the Dōji clansmen, also known as Onijin (鬼人 - Demon People). They have the ability to tap into their demonic bloodline, causing a transformation.They become taller and gain more feral appearances while their muscles grow, granting them the temporary visage of Oni. Though not a jutsu, the transformations must be trained as if they were. Genin can begin with their D-Rank Transformation unlocked if explained in their history. To advanced the transformation to C-Rank, they must train it using the wordcount needed to train a C-Rank jutsu.These transformations grant a boost to the strength stat. At D and C-Rank, this is by 1 Level. At B-Rank, this increases to 2 Levels. At A-Rank by 3, and finally S-Rank by 5. They also start with 10% more chakra. However, due to their heritage, they take +20 more damage from Sealing Jutsu while Medical Ninjutsu isn't as effective by 10 points.

Chakra Cost: D-Rank: 15 chakra, 10 to maintain. C-Rank: 20 chakra, 15 to maintain. B-Rank: 25 chakra, 20 to maintain. A-Rank: 40 chakra, 25 to maintain. S-Rank: 60 chakra, 30 to maintain. The cooldowns are base ones from Jutsu Guide.

E-Rank Posts : 22 Join date : 2016-07-04

Looks good to me overall, though increased the medical jutsu weakness from 5 to 10 points.

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E-Rank Posts : 22 Join date : 2016-07-04

Kimura Jigumo wrote:: Name: Akuma no Sosen (悪魔の祖先 - Demonic Ancestry)
Origin: Dōji
Type: Special Characteristic
Appearance: Varies, however, the main characteristics one may have normally are: Up to three horns which are two feet long, unnatural skin color (red, blue, yellow, etc), fangs, claws, hair becoming longer and more wild, as well as growing an extra 3 feet. Their muscle mass also increases as well. Members can have these features while in their human forms naturally, but the horns reach 6 inches at the max and are dulled to the point they can do no damage. Their skin will only be slightly tinted in the color their demon form is, while only their canines become sharp.

Description: The ability of the Dōji clansmen, also known as Onijin (鬼人 - Demon People). They have the ability to tap into their demonic bloodline, causing a transformation.They become taller and gain more feral appearances while their muscles grow, granting them the temporary visage of Oni. Though not a jutsu, the transformations must be trained as if they were. Genin can begin with their D-Rank Transformation unlocked if explained in their history. To advanced the transformation to C-Rank, they must train it using the wordcount needed to train a C-Rank jutsu.These transformations grant a boost to the strength stat. At D and C-Rank, this is by 1 Level. At B-Rank, this increases to 2 Levels. At A-Rank by 3, and finally S-Rank by 10. They also start with 10% more chakra. However, due to their heritage, they take +20 more damage from Sealing Jutsu while Medical Ninjutsu isn't as effective by 5 points.

Chakra Cost: D-Rank: 15 chakra, 10 to maintain. C-Rank: 20 chakra, 15 to maintain. B-Rank: 25 chakra, 20 to maintain. A-Rank: 40 chakra, 25 to maintain. S-Rank: 60 chakra, 30 to maintain. The cooldowns are base ones from Jutsu Guide.

No you didn't

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E-Rank Posts : 22 Join date : 2016-07-04

Approved Oni