Eve Umbral
Anbu Captain
Posts : 13
Join date : 2016-05-13
 |  Subject: Iron Sand Customs Mon May 23, 2016 4:05 am | |
| - God Killing Spear:
Name: God Killing Spear of Eve Umbral
Rank: A-rank
Element: Magnet Release
Specialties: Ninjutsu
Requirements: Iron Sand | Magnet Release | 1 pound of Iron Shavings
Description: A very well known technique in Eve's arsenal, it has almost became her classic go to because of the attacks incredible range and piercing power. The jutsu did not have a name till Eve proved that she could rip through a boulder with her spear. Thus, it was named the God Killing Spear.
This technique works by gathering the iron sand a molding it into a 3 foot long very thin spear with a spiral tip in order to rip through its target easier with a spin.
When activated the spear then levitates near the wielder as the user takes their aim on their target. The wielder uses their magnetic abilities to put a lot of tension on the spear so that when it is released, its fired at a incredible speed, Eve also condenses chakra into the spear to stop it from falling apart.
The spear can travel up to 120 meters. Although because of firing it at such a long distance, the iron sand used to create that spear is often times loss unless the wielder goes to retrieve, it will likely be to far away to just manipulate back into your control. The spear can rip through anything up to the density of Iron. The spear can only travel in a straight path as well and once fired can not be manipulated to change course.
Damage: A-Rank Jutsu: 60
Chakra: A-Rank Jutsu: 40
Cooldown: 2 post
Word Count: 3000 words
Cannon or Custom: Custom
Last edited by Eve Umbral on Sun May 29, 2016 9:33 pm; edited 1 time in total | |
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Munakata Koshimaru
Kage
Posts : 333
Join date : 2016-05-18
The Ninja
Clan: N/A
Specialties: Taijutsu | Bukijutsu | Ninjutsu | Genjutsu
Elements: Doton | Katon | Fūton
| | Subject: Re: Iron Sand Customs Mon May 23, 2016 9:41 am | |
| I'mma have to say hold this for a moment. I wanna bring it to staff to see if Iron Sand/Gold Dust should be added to the limited list (as they are both quite powerful). Once I get a answer, I'll you what's to edit as needed. | |
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Eve Umbral
Anbu Captain
Posts : 13
Join date : 2016-05-13
| | Subject: Re: Iron Sand Customs Sun May 29, 2016 9:34 pm | |
| I kept only the spear because you made the manipulation (Thanks). So could you check it out. | |
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Munakata Koshimaru
Kage
Posts : 333
Join date : 2016-05-18
The Ninja
Clan: N/A
Specialties: Taijutsu | Bukijutsu | Ninjutsu | Genjutsu
Elements: Doton | Katon | Fūton
| | Subject: Re: Iron Sand Customs Sun May 29, 2016 11:35 pm | |
| Increase the cooldown to 8 posts or lower the range on it. Note what the speed is for when its fired. Also, while it could rip through iron and such, remember that this site uses a health system. Meaning, depending on the amount of health of your opponent, it won't rip through them like cloth. | |
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