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PostSubject: Yin Healing Wound Destruction   Thu Jun 30, 2016 4:02 pm

Name: Yin Healing Wound Destruction

Rank: A

Element: -

Specialties: Medical

Requirements: -


Description: Range is limited to self. The jutsu premptively heals tissue, which results in a form of damage reduction against incoming attacks, whether jutsu or physical. The amount of damage reduced with this jutsu is 60 per usage. The user must be able to identify where the attack will land and apply chakra there.

Damage: -

Chakra: 40 (15 per post extended)

Cooldown: 5


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Cannon or Custom: Canon


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PostSubject: Re: Yin Healing Wound Destruction   Thu Jun 30, 2016 4:27 pm

60 is a bit big for an A-Rank without real drawbacks or a bigger chakra cost. Reduce it to 40 or bring up the chakra cost. Also, this jutsu is technically maintainable, so you can add a maintence cost if you want, though you must note you must determine where an attack must land and add the chakra to that specific spot.

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PostSubject: Re: Yin Healing Wound Destruction   Fri Jul 01, 2016 6:57 pm

Er, edited.
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PostSubject: Re: Yin Healing Wound Destruction   Fri Jul 01, 2016 7:04 pm

I'm sorry, I read it wrong. You can change the 40 back to 60, and increase the cooldown to 5.

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PostSubject: Re: Yin Healing Wound Destruction   Fri Jul 01, 2016 7:06 pm

Edited, thanks.
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PostSubject: Re: Yin Healing Wound Destruction   Fri Jul 01, 2016 7:30 pm

increase the upkeep to 15 and remember, if the opponent strikes the spot where the chakra isn't applied you take damage, ok?

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PostSubject: Re: Yin Healing Wound Destruction   Fri Jul 01, 2016 7:51 pm

Edited; don't worry, I won't forget xD
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PostSubject: Re: Yin Healing Wound Destruction   Fri Jul 01, 2016 7:55 pm

Approved breh

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